The DSV's crew could be Altas and slaves but there would be occasions when crew members were out of direct contact with Zen (or its equivalents), and the slave Blake meets is certainly capable of independent mental activity. (I assume that the designation 'Deep Space Vessel indicates that it was a research vessel: Zen's statement that information must be acquired not given would be consistent with this. Was the 'image device' Zen used on the persons from the London a means of keeping revolting …
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One issue that has to be considered is whether the System's space centre is the equivalent of a (Terran) dome or of Servalan's command base (in either case with the equivalent of Central Control integrated). It is clear from the way the Liberator 'fits into' the holding bay (including the access doors) DSVs date from at least the time the space structure was constructed (and there are at least two holding bays - as the other DSV was not previously seen when the Liberator arrived).
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Kathryn wrote:
"So... what do *you* think?"
I quite enjoyed Limbo, though it's not one of Sheila's best. There were, I
thought, two main problems with it:
a] I don't think it *entirely* escapes Mary-Suedom, since there is that (for
*me* annoying) business the The Heroine having all the emotional answers (to
Gauda Prime and Malodaar) and giving way too much advice to both Avon and
later Vila.
b] tied up with that is a tendency to 'show *and* tell' rather than 'show
instead of tell' - …
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interactions, but doesn't seem to trust herself as the writer to do so, she
then has The Heroine spell them out again.
Oh, and [c] with *my* Avon, crying wouldn't help one little bit, and he
would never break down like that in front of anyone - he'd quite literally
rather die. But that is my take on the character, and it's not *too*
jarring.
Re [b] I can understand the urge, however. With Blakes 7, the characters
are both *extremely* buttoned up and extremely contradictory, and trying
*to* simply show can get very very difficult (anyone else find themselves
shouting at the monitor occasionally <g>?)
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Nico wrote:
"I also noticed that Jill was very even-handed in her treatment of all the
crew (indeed, she seems to like them all) and it would be nice if it stayed
that way. I'm sure David wouldn't do this, but it would be a pity if anyone
else doing a novelisation showed their prejudices for or against a
character."
Like I would, probably :-)
While I quite like the idea, I have to say I prefer writing my own scribbles
where I can edit out people I don't enjoy writing *and* write in my …
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style (which would involve describing Tarvin as having the face of a wary
and none-too-bright guppy - and you don't want to know how I mentally
describe Servalan or Travis 2 <g>) I think for me, and probably some others,
the constraints of the episode, the whole episode and nothing but the
episode would outweigh the fun ...
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(As usual, this review can also be found at my Net-fic reviews
page <http://www.katspace.com/reviews/netfic>)
The Way To Go Home
(Blake's 7/Real Ghostbusters)
by Sheila Paulson <venkie(a)aol.com>
at <http://members.aol.com/Venkie/rgb/rgb.htm>
This is a sequel to "Limbo" but doesn't work quite so well.
It's more self-indulgent and doesn't have the same kind of unifying theme
as the previous story. The characters are too insightful to be true,
I just found that a bit too hard …
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with the advice to the B7 characters to be more "touchy-feely"
because, well, they just aren't that kind of people (especially Avon!).
On the other hand, there were moments of wit, cool wierdness, action
and definitely a lot of niceness, so if you feel like some niceness,
and want to find out what happened next, then you wouldn't be wasting your
time.
So... what do *you* think?
Kathryn Andersen
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Limbo
by Sheila Paulson <venkie(a)aol.com>
at <http://members.aol.com/Venkie/rgb/rgb.htm>
This story has a number of things in it which would
send many a fan running for the delete key even before they'd
tried to read the story. It has an original female protagonist.
It's set in the 20th Century. It's told in first-person.
And almost the only other Blake's 7 …
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But before you start screaming "Mary-Sue! Mary-Sue! Kill! Kill! Kill!"
let me tell you the things which rescue this story from Mary-Sue-dom.
Firstly, I doubt very much that Sheila Paulson is a widow living in Iowa.
And the protagonist certainly isn't Mz. Perfect.
But more importantly, this story works because of the thematic resonance
set up between the protagonist and Avon, both being people who've
shut out the world because of the pain of loss. Well, *I* think
it works. And it's fun to see the reaction of Avon to things
in the 20th Century. Some people may still find it too much of a wishlist
of all the things one could say to Avon to try to make it right.
But, hey, this is Sheila Paulson! Happy endings are her middle name.
So... what do *you* think?
Kathryn Andersen
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Tarrant: Or?
Avon: Do you want me to threaten you?
Tarrant: Why not? I haven't had a good laugh in ages.
Avon: Sensible. You could die laughing.
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I read this story some time back, and I have to say I liked it a lot. The
ocf didn't strike me as too Mary-Sue-ish, she was handled very well, IMO.
Mind you, I haven't come across many of that type of story to compare it
with.
I particularly liked the way the widow's dog, which was her husbands ad only
really tolerated her for his sake, attached itself to Avon, and the way he
pretended not to care and then fondled it under cover of the table.
Might say more later, but it's time I went to work.…
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Mel
"So, I'm not alone after all."
Avon, Horizon.
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David wrote:
> Me, I go for the gentle giant idea. See post 17854.
Oh, so do I and I'm sure that's what the series writers intended!
> Sticking to canon sounds like a popular and good idea.
> If and when my Gan Back Story is done I shall post it somewhere on the
> net. It contains no surprises; he is just a worker on the Star Queen,
> a bit like the cruiser Space Princess (Gold).
Sounds interesting. As so little is known about the crew, I've had fun
making up pasts for them …
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Sorry to have put you off doing a novelisation though. That's why very few
are interested in doing it, I suspect, as there's so little lee-way to be
creative when just describing the ep in a story format. I may volunteer for
one of my favourites though.
Nico
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(snipped nov. of S1 E11 & 12 and David's Gan on Star Queen)
Nico
I'm not sure about this one. My Gan has a different background, but I
wouldn't impose that on a novelisation of a series episode. I too
would like to do one some time when I'm not too busy, but I won't add
anything from my universe, IOW tell one of my own stories.
David
It is a fair comment. I yield and defer, and delegate the novelisation
to someone else.
Nico
I also noticed that Jill was very even-handed in her treatment …
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the crew (indeed, she seems to like them all) and it would be nice if
it stayed that way. I'm sure David wouldn't do this, but it would be a
pity if anyone else doing a novelisation showed their prejudices for
or against a character. Just as an example from the archives
(snipped anti-female Gan)
David
Me, I go for the gentle giant idea. See post 17854. It is worth
holding in mind.
Nico
Maybe people could suggest some rules for consistency, (e.g. stick to
canon) but too many restrictions would also take the fun out of it.
David
Sticking to canon sounds like a popular and good idea.
If and when my Gan Back Story is done I shall post it somewhere on the
net. It contains no surprises; he is just a worker on the Star Queen,
a bit like the cruiser Space Princess (Gold).
DC
http://tezcatlipoca.algonet.se/cgi-bin/getbyid.pl?id=17854
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