Sally had lots of wonderful ideas, and a few duff ones:
>Anywhere at all after The Way Back ... bring back Dev Tarrant.
Make Dev and Del the same person.
>The Web
...
>Expand the Cally-being-taken-over story to expound
>on Avon & Jenna's ideas about pitching *her*.
Hear hear! It's her second episode, only the first time she's ever been
taken over, and a perfectly good storyline about how on earth they're going
to trust her again even if they don't dump her peters out with "Oh, she's
OK again now." Lots of scope for Cally/Jenna interaction. Er, maybe other
list.
>SLD - more Bercol and Rontane, please.
Repeat for any given episode.
>Trial - see SLD.
Ditto.
>Killer - deal with the fact that Our Heroes didn't catch
> the bug. Let Dr Bellfriar /Gambrill/Tynus/even Dr Wiler
>survive and join Our Heroes (lovely set of guests this
>one has).
Gosh, I must go back and look at Dr Wiler. And Julia, about that story
again...
>Voice - make the storyline make sense, cut it down and
>show what happened afterwards. Substitute Alta Morag
> for Ven Glyn.
Ooh yes. I may be one of the few Voices for the Past, but this is the
single thing that would make it even better. That and Bercol and Rontane.
>After Star One - have Zen's search-and-rescue program
>(aka 'let's turn me into a dumping ground for stray waifs')
>go a bit skewed, so instead of listening to Orac and picking
> up Our Heroes, he collects a brand-new seven fleeing from
>Freedom City (which got dented by a passing Andromedan
>fruit juicer) - Krantor and Toise, the Klute, Chenie, Jarriere,
>a paratrooper in a nun's habit (wrong fandom?) and one of
>those Sheiks of Arabeee ...
And Garak. And someone being played by Alan Rickman. (Privately, I am
totally overcome at the subtlety in which you managed to sneak in the
really key bit here...)
>Alternately, Powerplay - bring Fearless Leader back (yes,
>yes, what do you expect from moi? This is a *fantasy* edit,
Suits my fantasy.
> Have the new President cut up for spare parts, just for fun
No, no! But you could give Calle his fantasy and have the Chengans start
cutting her clothes off her before she's rescued...
>The Harvest of Kairos - kill Jarvik fifty minutes earlier.
Penny's done that. Hang on - I have another idea. Get Penny to write the
script instead of Ben Steed.
>Rumours of Death - hire someone else to play Anna
NO!!!
>Death-Watch - someone speak *severely* to Zen about
>the clothes he/it's doling out at this stage. Keep Deeta.
Or have Deeta turn out to be Dev (assuming Del wasn't him).
>Power - shoot Ben Steed.
And hire Penny again. By the way, hitwoman, BS is your next target...
>Stardrive - pretend it never happened.
But keep Vila being clever while pretending to be drunk. Just attach it to
something more interesting, preferably involving Bercol, Rontane, Alta
Morag, Dev Tarrant or Jarriere...
>Assassin
...
> Kill Piri just before we meet her and make Neebrox the assassin instead.
Penny's killed her too. Neebrox is a brilliant idea, but why not
substitute our very own hitwoman at this point?
>Sand
...
>Let the sand bury the pair of them. OTOH, let's
>hear more of Orac's rhapsodising ...
Have Orac fall in love with Servalan.
>Blake
Stop PD overacting in the final scene.
Bother, I'm supposed to be working today...
Harriet