Thanks for all the interesting responses to my query.
I agree with Mistral's observation that it's the quality of the description not the quantity that counts -- though it doesn't answer the obvious next question of how to write the gem-like background description that in a few crisp sentences gives a diverse set of readers a feel for the setting/character.
Neil:
Description can also be used for authorial mouthpiecing, if you're into authorial mouthpiecing (which I am). I did this quite a bit in A Casting Of Swords ....
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How anyone else actually reads it may be utterly different.
While I quite enjoy authorial mouthpiecing, if I'm recalling the right piece, then I thought the background description in this was a touch OTT -- I seem to recall skipping quite a bit while reading, and mentally substituting a cross between the seedier end of the docks in Portsmouth (where I was brought up) and those in Lisbon (pusher-laden).
Tavia
From: Tavia Chalcraft tavia@btinternet.com
While I quite enjoy authorial mouthpiecing, if I'm recalling the right piece, then I thought the background description in this was a touch
OTT --
I seem to recall skipping quite a bit while reading, and mentally substituting a cross between the seedier end of the docks in Portsmouth (where I was brought up) and those in Lisbon (pusher-laden).
The style was a deliberate pastiche of William Gibson (Neuromancer etc), and he does tend to be adjective-happy. Personally I rather like his style, very dense and claustrophobic, and far better than overly sparse description.
Neil