In message 07c301c0d401$b5248860$0c00a8c0@codex, Una McCormack una@qresearch.org.uk writes
No, one bad line:-) From the description I've heard of the notes on the script (I haven't seen it myself), Ridge was responsible for dropping a few words from the script, which action IMO heightened the impact of that last scene.
Well don't keep us in suspense! :)
I'm not entirely sure about the etiquette, as the only place I have a direct quote is from a thread on The Other List. I'd rather leave it up to those who've actually seen the script in question as to whether they want to put their notes on a publicly archived part of the net. The relevant line is "Oh, Avon...", for those who remember the discussion.